tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6837377641582245515.post8739818949897275230..comments2023-10-15T03:17:27.336-07:00Comments on Breathings: You Already Said That . . .Jessica L. Celayahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13725283349220405323noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6837377641582245515.post-23661411834625902262012-05-31T07:58:01.523-07:002012-05-31T07:58:01.523-07:00yup, easily done. said is my next chopper!yup, easily done. said is my next chopper!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6837377641582245515.post-27029289462450874122012-05-30T17:32:53.329-07:002012-05-30T17:32:53.329-07:00I hadn't thought of this!I hadn't thought of this!gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08242071379361512021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6837377641582245515.post-65011042766718616892012-05-30T15:44:42.904-07:002012-05-30T15:44:42.904-07:00A great post and good advice. Thanks.
RiyaA great post and good advice. Thanks.<br /><br />RiyaRomance Reader https://www.blogger.com/profile/10633164931292182035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6837377641582245515.post-27012557700833218552012-05-30T11:48:33.669-07:002012-05-30T11:48:33.669-07:00A good tip to remember thanks.
Yvonne.A good tip to remember thanks.<br /><br />Yvonne.RHYTHM AND RHYMEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11386975261804630799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6837377641582245515.post-49292089478485152772012-05-30T09:08:30.172-07:002012-05-30T09:08:30.172-07:00so true---except when it is a particular character...so true---except when it is a particular character that talks that way or has a limited vocabulary :)Lynn Proctorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16349867270815243053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6837377641582245515.post-25439791766501739312012-05-30T07:15:01.509-07:002012-05-30T07:15:01.509-07:00Thanks for the tip! :) Happy Wednesday!Thanks for the tip! :) Happy Wednesday!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6837377641582245515.post-42312686853954520052012-05-30T05:19:04.334-07:002012-05-30T05:19:04.334-07:00Oh GOD,I am just now realising how much I use over...Oh GOD,I am just now realising how much I use over words some words and phrases. I'm SO tired of "eyes" and "just" and "I couldn't help but" - I'm going cross-eyed from them all!Kyra Lennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13853462182450429660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6837377641582245515.post-3975469726346334512012-05-30T05:06:40.034-07:002012-05-30T05:06:40.034-07:00One way I can be more attuned to this problem is b...One way I can be more attuned to this problem is by reading my work out loud. Somehow my ears can pick up repeats that my eyes miss. Great advice, Jessica!Pam Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430692684579547400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6837377641582245515.post-34174850019324966182012-05-30T04:23:29.240-07:002012-05-30T04:23:29.240-07:00Good post. I'm sure I'm guilty of this - p...Good post. I'm sure I'm guilty of this - probably with me it's "she" because there's a lot of description of what the main character is doing. Have you tried Wordle? You can paste your entire novel into it and it'll show up the most common words biggest. You've reminded me I need to do it!Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.com