I tend to overuse
words. A lot. I have my favorites and they just happen. As writers we need to
be wary of this. Some words you need to use a word ton. Like the and a. Others
not so much. As I recently blogged about, I had serious issues with the word
eyes in my latest work in progress. Three hundred and fifty uses of the word
eyes in an 80,000 novel is a bit much.
You can google
lists of overused words in fiction, but you should also pay attention to your
own word usage. You may pick up a word and use it constantly that isn’t on one
of the lists.
Usually, I start my
own list of words to seek and destroy. Do this and create a new list often. I
tend to have word trends or words of the month. A few months ago, the word was
fool. In my novel, everyone was a fool and calling each other fools. Another
time, it was almost fell. My characters were slipping and sliding and almost
falling all over the place.
As you are editing
your novel, pay attention to the words you use. If you are uncertain if a word
is being used too often, use the find all function of your document. Seeing
them all highlight can make a difference.
Happy writing!
Good post. I'm sure I'm guilty of this - probably with me it's "she" because there's a lot of description of what the main character is doing. Have you tried Wordle? You can paste your entire novel into it and it'll show up the most common words biggest. You've reminded me I need to do it!
ReplyDeleteOne way I can be more attuned to this problem is by reading my work out loud. Somehow my ears can pick up repeats that my eyes miss. Great advice, Jessica!
ReplyDeleteOh GOD,I am just now realising how much I use over words some words and phrases. I'm SO tired of "eyes" and "just" and "I couldn't help but" - I'm going cross-eyed from them all!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the tip! :) Happy Wednesday!
ReplyDeleteso true---except when it is a particular character that talks that way or has a limited vocabulary :)
ReplyDeleteA good tip to remember thanks.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
A great post and good advice. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteRiya
I hadn't thought of this!
ReplyDeleteyup, easily done. said is my next chopper!
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